Barbados Nascar

Barbados Nascar

Hello everyone. I love reading and writing novels, novellas, mangas, comic book. Anything with a great story

registered at: Feb 06, 2025
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    Jan 10, 2026

    this separate one is tough so bear with me.
    Daphne, Daphne, Daffy
    where's my girl at?
    I know the last dinner scene featured her a bit with Nicole but we don't see her at all until way way later. Don't get me wrong she doesn't have to be there but especially after the breakup, i surely thought she would have comforted him at least. you've shown plenty of times the siblings affection for each other despite driving each other nuts and Daphne always noticing and advising Max. I just think you could have handled that much better than you did.
    Now don't think I hate this series or anything bro, it's just my opinions and its cool if you feel type of way, no hard feelings.
    to the positives now. I absolutely love the termination concept and how it ties up to the ending of it all. I actualy asked m dad and yeah it's a real thing that happens, i thought you pulled it outta your ass. so points for that.
    It was nice seeing Bob the squireel guy was in a good place now, loved that idea in the beginning, also Diane was a nice arc fo her. Even though you don't show these characters after sessions, i think how she arrived to this conclusion was believable but would have liked some Todd too. Also John 22 times could have made an appearance. Also Max mother and brother, was his brother found?
    but i get it, after I watched stranger things and struggling with my own series endings are really hard and i appreciate you at least took time to finish this respectfully for people like me, the only one reading😂.
    Congratulations on finishing this one and if you do decide to come back to it, please post it...for me okay!! even if its a flashforward kind a thing and like ten years have passed or something

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    THE DIARY OF A NORMAL LOSER
    Chapter:22