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Hello everyone. I love reading and writing novels, novellas, mangas, comic book. Anything with a great story
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Jun 03, 2025
solid chapter man. I liked it a lot. Nice flow as always, liked wholesomeness with the Kitties. I like Serena but I feel like we haven't spent too much time with Lily. I feel she is always in the background, but Max and Lily specifically haven't spent too much time on their own. Anyways, it was a nice chapter, also i'm missing the office-therapy shenanigans
Awesome chapter. Just a slight nitpick, since they had not see the city, you could have spent some time, detailing the big buildings and their experience. this is optional of course
May 29, 2025
Amazing i must say. Liked this style, it felt like after IRL matches and you included Rio Ferdinand and Cesc, the premier league goats. Loved it. Keep it up man
May 22, 2025
To:Robin Grayson
thank you so much. appreciate the comment and everyone reading
May 21, 2025
Nice chapter bro
May 13, 2025
Sorry I took a while to respond. No, Emily didn't see him clearly but i will get to that in the next chapter. I appreciate your support and the comments. Feel free to ask if you more questions
May 10, 2025
To:theACE
Yeah, unfortunately man. I had shortened the story to fit the deadline but I gave one of my friends to read it and they felt it had something missing, so i scraped it and focused on the original plot i had, which I'm not sure is much better anyway but hope you'll stick till the end. I'm trying to plot out everything now Oh and technically Zero's powers are relatively new to him at this point, like he is using it on instinct. I still haven't planned it but that is the jist of it really. Although i will get into that before i wrap things up
May 06, 2025
Like the first chapter. it's great, cool concept
Thanks. I try my best but will it be bad if i say i'm glad i gave you nightmares because that is what i was going for. I'm grinding to release these last chapters before the deadline
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I like this chapter, it was really good. Especially the moment with the kid Xander, hope he can comeback later or something. And i liked this side of CIX, it feels like his character is bland or something, sorry for saying. Maybe that's what you were going for but i like this side of him and Vega. But I still think Grayson is the better character
May 05, 2025
Good luck on your exams. i'll check them out when you post
May 04, 2025
appreciate the comment though. By the way I haven't seen your other stories as of late.
I don't know, it was actually harder to describe the buildings than the violent, gore stuff. I like horror-adjacent things. Hopefully i'll be done on time, This is supposed to be Book 1 with the second book continuing after, we'll see
Let me just ask, is the (character's name) dead. I mean did Eirelyn kill him and turn him to a Dullahan
