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Apr 16, 2025

huge disenchantment vibes

The Princess of the Dragon’s Tummy

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2025

Back to civilization! I'm thinking this chapter might be quite an interesting twist. Can't wait for the Berseker-princess scene 😍

I Took The Demon Lord’s Heir Hostage To End The War, But Then She Stole My Heart

Chapter:16

Apr 05, 2025

Another great chapter. Having the demon princess staying with Dave seems like a punishment for both of them. At least berserker will have a great time 😆

I Took The Demon Lord’s Heir Hostage To End The War, But Then She Stole My Heart

Chapter:15

Apr 03, 2025

To:Ducky123

I was a bit confused when I read your first comment. Then I saw your second and I laughed. loudly.

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Chapter:6

Apr 02, 2025

Hello guys! Hope you enjoy this trip in the desert cause it's not over yet! Is Sato the luckiest man alive or nah?

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Chapter:6

Mar 31, 2025

To:Matei Miorcaneanu

Thanks for your comment! That was a really fun part to write. I'll sure try to bring more parodies to the table as the story goes on.

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Chapter:3

Mar 31, 2025

To:Ducky123

Thanks for your feedback! This chapter is really long, especially in a fast-paced novel like this. My problem was that if I ended the chapter after they defeated the obstacle course, the next one would've been very short since the conversation with Sato is only a few hundred words long. While I'm still unsure how to fix this chapter, I'll do my best to keep the next one shorter.

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Chapter:3

Mar 29, 2025

To:Ducky123

you're doing great so far. The format is a bit limiting too, you can only add that many details in 1-1.5k words. Still, you're really good at writing a set-up so it's not feeling boring at all. It's just a little hard to picture 'the movie' in your head, but that's not that big of an issue really.

I Took The Demon Lord’s Heir Hostage To End The War, But Then She Stole My Heart

Chapter:6

Mar 29, 2025

He was a great Narrator, and will be an even better Journalist. This chapter comes from me wondering if it is possible to switch the Narrator's person mid-book and somehow this happened. Hope you enjoy!

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Chapter:4

Mar 29, 2025

That was a hell of a fight! I'm curious about how all of this will play out, cause even if Percia can win Dave's squad, I don't think the rest of the humans will treat a demon so nicely, especially one brought in the kingdom by a guild of misfits. It was a great ark ending! Keep out the good work. As for straying away from the theme, if I were in the jury I would argue that fighting for Percia fits very well in the idea of brotherly love that you're going for.

I Took The Demon Lord’s Heir Hostage To End The War, But Then She Stole My Heart

Chapter:14

Mar 29, 2025

It was really fun to see Dave going from the cocky "I want to decimate all demons" to being scared for him and his crew. You really excel at setting the stage for an action-packed chapter. The only thing that I could suggest you is to add a few dynamics things here and there in these chapters too since they can feel a bit static. Other than that it was great and it made me want to go ahead and read the next chapter as soon as possible.

I Took The Demon Lord’s Heir Hostage To End The War, But Then She Stole My Heart

Chapter:6

Feb 27, 2025

I'm glad I got to read chapter 2 and 3 together since chapter 2 got me invested in the 'misfits' guild and chapter 3 set the stage for something big. I'm thinking the next chapter is going to be full of action and I'm all for it! Keep up the good work 🤗

I Took The Demon Lord’s Heir Hostage To End The War, But Then She Stole My Heart

Chapter:3

Feb 23, 2025

To:lolitroy

When the demon lord stopped time and everything turned grey I was imagining Reem watching around but then the demon says "open your eyes." and I was extremely confused. Also, I still don't know if Reem or the gunslinger was the one asking "Why else would you talk to me?" That fight scene was pretty confusing for me as a reader.

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:4

Feb 21, 2025

Tbh, i got lost multiple times in the first 2 chapters but these ones felt a lot more enjoyable. All i know is, if i were the demon lord i would really question if that limb is worth an hostage like her 😩

if the moon forgets to smile

Chapter:4

Feb 21, 2025

To:_Caity_

Thank you for your feedback! When I said the AI made heir own language consisting of "beeps and boops" I didn't mean that they can't talk in english anymore, but rather they will only complete tasks if humans ask them in beeps and boops. I slightly edited the chapter to make that more clear so thank you for your feedback 🙏

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Chapter:1

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