Apr 04, 2025
This was a very well written first chapter, well done. The internal monologuing was rich with character, and served as a well implemented tonic given out to the story to balance out the emblematic circumstances. Amano seems to be a bit self deprecating from the descriptions in this chapter, which suits her well given the situation. Overall, your writing has fascinated me, and I certainly see quite a bit of potential in you and your writing. I will continue to read this enticing tale
