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Sep 13, 2025
It's understandable, I created my story to be more or less 5 to 7 volumes, and I had to compress everything to 3 and that's where some quality is lost, anyway, it seems very appropriate to me.
Sep 10, 2025
To:rykuno
Thank you very much xD, I try not to make it so dense haha, greetings!
Sep 03, 2025
Very good start, Yugi trembles xD 10/10
Aug 29, 2025
Thank you very much. I do believe that using simple, less exotic names helps make them easier to remember. Of course, there are complex names for cities and nations.
To:DYNOS
Thanks so much. I'm experimenting with this genre with a gray protagonist, who makes you doubt whether his actions are good or bad. Plus, I had to adapt it to make it suitable for all audiences. Cheers!
To:Bauyrzhan
Not exactly. It was supposed to be inspired by "The Eminence in Shadows," but more political. In any case, the story evolved as I wrote. I only had a defined beginning and end; even the new characters who join "The Opera" changed. Thanks for your comment! Regards.
A very interesting beginning, I like the descriptions of the protagonist's life, it's very immersive and real.
Aug 17, 2025
To:Mai
I was writing the last chapters of the first part and I remembered your comment, it's definitely a TV drama xD
Jul 15, 2025
A very good start. I like how the first person feels lived-in. It looks like it's going to be interesting and full of surprises. 10/10
Jun 09, 2025
Thank you very much xD