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Aug 03, 2025

Magic? This world is interesting. I am curious about this world beyond the castle.

Brown Sugar Cinderella

Chapter:10

Aug 03, 2025

Another good chapter. I especially liked the description of him trying to communicate with the maid/nanny. Your narration style reminds me of Edgar Rice Burroughs.

Brown Sugar Cinderella

Chapter:9

Aug 03, 2025

To:PriestNii

Thank you very much. I start my stories with characters, and then put them in a situation. the story becomes theirs. my outline branches from there. I am not aware of the game you mentioned. O’Neill check it out.

The Last Revision

Chapter:8

Aug 03, 2025

About that…

Dominion Protocol Volume 11: The Memory Conspiracy

Chapter:22

Aug 03, 2025

OK. I can accept that ending. Thank you for not ending it earlier. This was a clever story, and I am glad that I read it.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:40

Aug 03, 2025

I don’t what is worse. not remembering or remembering.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:38

Aug 03, 2025

You did it again. You made me cry. Definitely not what I was hoping for.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:37

Aug 03, 2025

It is good that his mom is apologetic, but that doesn’t make everything ok. His dad is a real piece. Ivhope he is not based on someone real. I also hope the memories come back.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:36

Aug 03, 2025

I am biting my finger nails. I am glad the Bo-lo-to does not know about her yet.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:22

Aug 03, 2025

you were able to make this short chapter intense. Bo-lo-to is more powerful than I thought. I am glad that they split the party. I think that will be key later.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:21

Aug 02, 2025

Sorry, but the amnesia makes me sad and angry. she doesn’t deserve that. I am just thinking out loud, but I hope it doesn’t end this way. My heart is hoping for a happy ending.

For The Golden Flower I Stole In That Rain

Chapter:35

Aug 02, 2025

To:Mara

thank you

The Last Revision

Chapter:8

Aug 02, 2025

Hr has not aged since the end of the Cold War

Dominion Protocol Volume 11: The Memory Conspiracy

Chapter:21

Aug 02, 2025

Love it. The dream sequence sets everything in perspective. Rina made an unpopular decision a few chapters back, but everything is in play now. I am glad Uruk is on her side, but I hope she is able to make up with Selene.

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:17

Aug 02, 2025

So both sides are playing the waiting game.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:20

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