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Dec 23, 2025
Thanks for the shoutout. It was a nice story with an ending that becomes a new beginning. Both characters changed so much in the story.
ice ending to the first part of your story. we learned a lot that was kept secret in the beginning. Where will the story go from here?
🥲🥰This chapter was amazing. I think Fury understands more about how she feels than she wants to admit. There will definitely be questions from her colleagues about it in the morning.
Things are turning around. It was good to see that Mai’Ri seemed happy. That is such a change from the previous chapters. I think that Fury is getting more than she bargained for.
Dec 21, 2025
I haven’t decided which character i resonate with most. Probably Mel. But when I read Nina, she makes me cry.
I enjoy the little bread crumbs of past life that you leave. Not knowing if her past friends are alive and being glad she is not her brother all tell us a lot about her.
we are getting everything from the perspective of Fury. It is easy for the reader to forget that Mai’Ri is going through the same thing. She is processing her feelings as well.
Another emotional chapter. You are capturing her emotions well. I feel like I am there with them. 😭
Dec 20, 2025
Ugh… Nina? I feel for her. But when I think about it Mel in her are not that different.
Another contest? How do you know so much about it? This story reads like you have more than a passing interest.
The plot thickens. This was a good break fro the previous emotional ones.
😭I… reading about abused children is difficult. I think that you portrayed the mentality well I just… 😭
To:Moon
always makes things better ☺️
Oh… This was darker than I was ready for this morning 😭
Dec 19, 2025
No!!!! I knew this was a bad idea.