Jul 28, 2025
I almost forgot about Aicha. It was a good chapter. You are good at telling the reader without actually saying what you want exactly. That didn’t come out the way I meant. I hope it makes sense.
I think she is still a little naive. She has her work cut out for her if she wants to warn Sara since they would all be traveling to the same place. Especially since we have established that her uncle is a great tracker.
