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Ryuukarize

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You may call me Rize (龍化利世).

Greetings.

I’m a… human. Probably.

I notice what others miss—pauses, fake smiles, delayed glances. Call me a nerd if you want; I don’t really care. I prefer observing over participating.

Why? I don’t like people.

Well… not exactly.

I just avoid them, don’t like being seen.

Though solitude can get unbearable sometimes.

I crave something lighthearted.
Like cherry blossoms—
petals drifting in spring.

I’ve read stories more than I’ve lived, so I thought—why not write my own?

I like folktales, novels, poems… anything that lets me narrate a story instead of just exist.

Sometimes it makes me feel like an NPC.

Even in my own life.

Nice to meet you, I guess.

registered at: Apr 13, 2025

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Apr 14, 2026

To:Ryuukarize

Show, Don't Tell*

Alters

Chapter:0

Apr 14, 2026

To:Tehji

Hmmm...

To be fair, from reading this chapter, I could already tell you already have quite a strong basis when it comes to "Don't Show, Not Tell" principles. However, sensory details aren't the only way to show it and that not everything needs to be told per se.

You may consider this principle using a cinematic point of view, like the one in movie. In here, it's called zoom-in and zoom-out principles: When you explained things using sensory details, that'd be zoom-in because it relies on showing the audience about each gesture, cue, and behavior. However, that's not the only zoom-in method you could do. You might also focus on the face and see, for example, the MC's (not to say it has to be them but this is to make the example easier to digest) reaction to a said scene as some kind of an emotional trigger, or else you might also intuitively infer some kind of symbolism during the zoom-in method by making this MC reminding himself about his goal, resolution, and perhaps, a strength to resolve. And these are quite crucial for writing.

However, you may also use zoom-out too. Think about when the shot is getting too distant yet it captures the bigger picture of this scene, and think about any narration or monologue could be said or any reaction could be done while the MC was screaming in pain or something like that, this would give you a much bigger advantage to tell the audience what's going without them getting bored.

So yes, it highly depends on the context: By showing, you show people what your characters are doing, thinking, speaking, if not feeling at that very moment while by telling, you tell them what they have been facing by far and it works as a way to gain this bigger picture kind of narration instead of showing every single thing.

It's almost similar to when you tell a random story to your friends or on internet. Basically, you don't have to show everything, but it doesn't mean you need to always tell them too: Showing everything makes things become way too transparent/translucent, while telling everything makes those become too visible/opaque. And yes, writing a web novel and a movie script actually are quite similar. So yeah, sorry for talking too much and I hope it helps. That's all.

Alters

Chapter:0

Apr 14, 2026

To:YuzuMango

Yeah, hopefully... I myself went into much lower one (x < 800 - 1000) considering I couldn't afford building those things up without paying attention about the emotional pay-off, matching its pacing and beat to the manga, or if not having a quick start instead of a slow burn and since it's not mandatory, hopefully it should be allowed.

Can a Board Game Boy Fall in Love with a Gamer Girl?

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

To:Amane

Lol. Anyway, I bursted my laugh. Maybe this should be the DDLC of manga.

Let's see.

Re:Write

Chapter:2

Apr 13, 2026

To:C.S. Marino

Yeah...

Maybe a bit of advice as fellow writers, especially for future chapters:

If it feels boring when you read it, trim it down until it doesn't.

Or if it feels like you can't get immersed by the story, add more cues, gestures, or symbolism. This will help a lot but don't spam them all at once: It'll be overwhelming.

I also joined this contest as well if you wanted to read and perhaps take some inspirations as a hand helper in some way. Alright, that's all and WYATB.

The Light I Felt That Day

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

This is quite a good start, but sadly too long...

Is your aim winning the event or do you just want to make them immersed?

Anyway, this was quite a decent setup for a romcom.

Can a Board Game Boy Fall in Love with a Gamer Girl?

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

That was quite an opening hook. The rythm was so right.

Some phrases could be tightened. Some grammar mistakes could be fixed.

But overall, this was above average.

Alters

Chapter:0

Apr 13, 2026

Honestly, too many info-dump but not really a bad first chapter.

Love that cute interaction between Kirika and Yuri.

The Light I Felt That Day

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

Romaji version cuz why not:

Kanzen ni yakusoku sareta shizukesa ga heya zenbu ni hibikiteita.
Rin ga donna kotae o dasu no ka o matte iru you na jikan datta.
Izu re ni shite mo, koko made no yarikata wa ore ni totte mo daibu bōken datta.

“Sō... tsumari, Akira-kun...”

“Hontō ni, watashi to tsukiau tsumori nano?”

Sō ka... sore da. Ore no kangae o yomareta ka.

Sono ichibō de, Hanashi Shiro wa konran shiteita.

“tsu, tsu, tsu... tsukiau? e, eeto... koibito to shite?”

“hai, watashi no itoshii imōto-san”

“tsukiau” — “tsu ki a u”

Sono oto ga kuchi kara ochita shunkan.

Sore wa tada no kotoba de wa nakatta.

Kakumo, sorezore no mōra goto ni aida ga ire rare, heya no zenin ni misetsukerarete iru yō datta. Kanji no katachi sono mono o mukidashi ni shita yōna kanji.

Hanashi Shiro wa mabataki o shita.

Kaogao ikinari akaku naru. tomato mitai ni.

“…e?”

“da, daite...?”

Yagate, yukkuri da ga kakujitsu ni, kūki ga kawatta.

“Arashi no mae no shizukesa.”
“Double-slit jikken.”

“hai hai” to Rin wa itta.

“tsukiau. deeto.”

“Akira-kun”

“kotae wa?”

“hai”

“demo... futari to issho ni. dōru deeto de”

“hehhhhhhhhhh?!”

“gufuk!”

“y-yōsha wa karate o sonna fū ni tsukau na yo, imōto yo...”

“b, baka janai no...”

“Akira-kun...”

My Romcom Is As Ridiculous As Quantum Physics

Chapter:12

Apr 13, 2026

Why is this so fire?

National College of Sexual Arts

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

No, Bali is a continent. Anyway, wtf...

Indonesian-based web novel? In this economy?

The Overthinking Author and Her Balinese Muse

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

To:Amane

Yeah, and as absourd as quantum mechanics.

My Romcom Is As Ridiculous As Quantum Physics

Chapter:4

Apr 13, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

You could say that. Basically, he rehearsed the answer until both parties found its way. It's clever but also risky, could be a backfire if there was a misunderstanding.

Or else, one of them pushed this offer as a stress-test.

My Romcom Is As Ridiculous As Quantum Physics

Chapter:11

Apr 13, 2026

Some funny but so silly ahhh trivia you might have missed:

Did you notice when he said “go about this” instead of something that read like “play this out”? Or when they used each other’s names instead of titles?

It might seem random but...

There was a subtle pun behind it:

じゃあ——どう付き合うつもりですか、会長？

(Jaa—dou tsukiau tsumori desu ka, kaichou?)

The word 付き合う (tsukiau) has multiple meanings:

- to accompany / go along with
- to deal with / engage with
- to date / go out with someone

And in Akira's case, it's all three of them at once.

My Romcom Is As Ridiculous As Quantum Physics

Chapter:11

Apr 13, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

Lmfao... anyway, explanation on the next chapter.

My Romcom Is As Ridiculous As Quantum Physics

Chapter:10

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