Jun 27, 2025
To:TheLeanna_M
I genuinely appreciate the critiques! Actually, I really found the ending of Volume 3 weak (and forced by length) but still decided to upload it (in a rush due to upcoming school year) and the changes made was meant to shorten the chapters~
I think that the first draft of Volume 3 Epilogue introduced a nuisance, and not a nuance of the theme I am trying to explore. I think I forced a comedic relief on a volume that is meant to be emotionally weighed. It's a good counterbalance (in some scenarios) but I think it really tilted the narrative off the hook and the identities of each characters.
And for the earlier chapters, there's a slight reformatting and cut-out scenes (some are new, some are improved) but it doesn't really change the rhetoric much so I suggest not going through them at all, but I would highly appreciate if you did :)))
