Jul 20, 2025
Nice descriptions. You do a lot without revealing too much, or making it too mysterious either. I like the idea of time magic, and mercenaries trying to capture her. It feels like a story Miyazaki would tell if he dipped his toes into isekai. I wonder if she can literally pass through time. Like there's a labyrinth of time somewhere and only she can enter through it. Someone who can experience multiple lifetimes and see multiple choices at once. I like it. It feels cosmic, yet something that can also be set up for an awesome abstract emotional climax.
If this were a tragedy, I wonder if her time magic is wearing thin, she sees that her choices in the future and becoming narrower and narrower, until she can only has one choice left
If it's more lighthearted romance or comedy, I wonder if she begins abusing her magic to court a boy instead of what it's meant for. That would be hilarious.
I will continue reading.