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Hi, I'm Oyinade Olawoyin — a storyteller who loves exploring deep emotions, quiet moments, and the beauty of human connection. Writing is my way of dreaming out loud. Thanks for reading my work — your support truly means the world to me.
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Apr 29, 2025
To:TheDipanshu
She does... or does she? 👀 Let’s just say things are about to get even more complicated!
First days can be chaotic, right? 😅 Don’t worry, we all have our lazy moments
I’m really glad you noticed that—there are so many layers to the lives in this story!
Yeah, this one came out shorter than usual—glad you still gave it a read!
Apr 25, 2025
That means a lot—thank you. I'm really glad she inspired you. Keep holding on to your passion, even in quiet moments. You’ve got this. 💛
Thank you so much, Dipanshu! ! I'm really touched that you connected with the chapter and Isabella's feelings. I’m really glad the chapter resonated with you.
Apr 23, 2025
Your writing is really good, and I love how you’ve brought Siddharth to life—especially letting us into his thoughts. Knowing what’s going on in the protagonist’s mind is such a key part of storytelling, and you’ve done that beautifully. One gentle suggestion: try showing more of the characters’ emotions through their body language and actions. There’s a bit more telling than showing in this chapter, and just a little shift could make the emotions even more powerful. You're off to a great start—keep going, you're doing amazing! 😊
Thanks. It's on inkitt and royal road. It's not at all popular and had a lot of flaws so i'd deleted it. But I still have three short stories on both platform.
Sometimes, certain chapters get more views than others. Oddly enough, it might be the chapter before a popular one that ends up with fewer views. I’m still new here, but I can related from the same pattern on Royal Road—and even once on Inkitt, where someone left a comment on a chapter, complaining about something that was actually explained in the one right before it!
Thank you so much! 😊 I’m really glad you noticed that shift in Alex’s character—funny how things turn around, right? As for whether he and Chris will become friends... well, we’ll see! 😄 This is actually my second novel, but it’s my first time writing something this emotionally layered. The tough feedback I got on my first story really pushed me to grow. Having writers like you around motivates me to keep improving. I’m still learning too—let’s keep getting better together! 💪✨
Thank you so much! I'm really glad the details and the twist caught your attention—especially that Indian reference! 😄 And about the views—maybe you brought some magic with you since you're the first reader! Appreciate your support! 💫
Apr 21, 2025
Thank you for your comment. I agree—it is sad how easily people let go of their dreams under the weight of life. That’s one of the reasons I wrote Isabella’s journey—to remind us that holding on to our passion matters. And I’m so inspired by your words. Please don’t ever stop dreaming. The world needs people like you who still believe. ❤️
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment! 😊 You’re paying close attention, and I love that. Yes—some things might feel a bit confusing right now, but the pieces will start coming together as the story unfolds. You're not alone in the questions you're asking, and they're definitely important ones. I’m really glad you're enjoying the mystery so far—thank you for reading and sticking with the story! 🙏
Thank you for your reply! I’m really glad you’re able to connect with Chris.
Thank you so much 🥹. Your words really encouraged me more than you know. I was honestly scared to start uploading this story because of how emotional and sensitive it is, but hearing this makes me feel like maybe it’s worth sharing after all. And please don’t compare your story to mine—we're all growing at our own pace. What matters is that you're writing, and you're willing to keep improving. That already makes you an amazing writer. I believe in you too!
