Jul 31, 2025
Good chapter, lots of solid descriptions, dog girl in particular is very well painted. I also like how disorientated he is and the toughness of his first challange😄🔥
Small qualm, but every other villager we see from Clint's PoV, only knowing the name of Renne but then naration intoruduces and describes Brann, I'd maybe have him introuduce himself like Renne rather then the narration doing so, just to keep it consistent. Very small thing mind you, gomen😆.