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aaa

Aug 25, 2025

Hmmmm, I think again my main thought is concisness, lot of words spent per topic and yet without describing much of the mansion or even characters present.

That aside, a slave! Considering the mention about the hero not understanding slavery last chapter too, excited to see where this headed😎

The Hero Must be Killed

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

Very fun premise! Opening on a letter is nice, it has more 1800 lit vibes even, which matches kind of nicely to set the tone.
The post story premise of a hero with nothing to do is great - I espiaclly like her mention of how Tanaka thinking her new role is a promotion fruastrates her inside.

I will say you could be a fair bit more concise, some lines repeat pretty much the same information earlier lines already did - and likewise the tenses of words are off in a few places, but thats all just polishing stuff for later drafts as they say🙌👍.

Overall very intruging opening🔥

The Hero Must be Killed

Chapter:1

Aug 25, 2025

Eyo really nice. I like how he's effectively made aquaintence with both the dragon and cobald. Last couple chapters were a little slower and more world focused too which I think is great - and some bonding with our Daisy.

Omnious ending about what to come as well. I quite enjoyed reading all that💖👍🔥

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:8

Aug 25, 2025

I quite like how enamoured he is with the nature and countryside, really sells his contrast with the tokyo city life he had❤️

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:7

Aug 25, 2025

To:kazesenken

Some adults take a while to mature🤣🤣

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:4

Aug 25, 2025

I approve of talking Griffon🔥

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:5

Aug 25, 2025

Good little move and incoperation of his past life, neat stuff😎.

I will say I hope we get a moment for the story to breathe soon😆, lotta back to back events so hopefully he can take stock a bit more calmly soon🙏

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:4

Aug 25, 2025

The line about her duagther possesing herself didn't quite make sense for me but the rest is great!🔥, The devil's rant about how he actually had a really good hand of cards in his past life is really solid, its nice to have a protag called out abit.

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:2

Aug 25, 2025

The plot do be thickening in this one📝📝

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:20

Aug 25, 2025

Good bit of set up! I actually really like the pacing of the gun inside the box inside the warehouse, and then all the pieces of the gun being slid together - It kinda gives a sense of cohesion with the sub plot, a rebellion, hidden, many disperate pieces coming together to form something quaint but deadly and versitile. Good stuff

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:19

Aug 24, 2025

And that's a clean 25 chapters! Next upload on Tuesday when we will begin Arc 3, the last of this volume!

Thank you for reading❤️

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:24

Aug 24, 2025

To:obliviousbushtit

No time to waste🤣.

Thanks for reading🔥

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:0

Aug 23, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

A rookie mistake🤣.

Thanks for reading🔥

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:15

Aug 23, 2025

This is quite an effective couple of opening chapters. Good sense of voice for protag and theres a nice constrast of how the salary lifestyle and the rural fantasy village are full of unfairness.

I also quite like the 'showman' being, very efficently characterised.

Otherworldly Acumen: The System's Rigged Against Me!

Chapter:1

Aug 23, 2025

Numarei becoming a sorta firendly rival is really nice. I like her clusmy bit of extesintialism and her own set of aestetics❤️🔥

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:18

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