Aug 09, 2025
An interesting premise! A renowned scientist being reincarnated, after being betrayed. Although, it does often read lie a script rather than a novel...But I like it that way anyways haha. Makes it a lot easier to picture what's happening.
If I can leave any advice, for the sake of the contest, I would still say not to overdo it with the descriptions. Allow the reader to create their own picture, so that they can be even more immersed into the story. Also, remove the titles within the text 😅
All in all, the story itself is good, keep it up
