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I am Nobody.
Dec 18, 2025
To:kcayu
Thank you so much for reading this story. I am happy that you liked it.
I really loved that quiet morning-after vibe and that warm tea ritual with Tau flowing felt incredibly tender and real, like they're slowly healing together.
Mel's endless self-doubt and rambling feel so real, as if I've been there, stumbling through chats, and Nina's quiet shyness brings a tender vulnerability, hinting at some sweet warmth brewing.
Dec 17, 2025
Nina's raw regret over the evening with Mel, that deep admiration for those lost paintings, and the crushing guilt about her parents' accident feel so painfully real. The flicker of hope in her drawing progress is beautiful amid the loneliness.
Dec 16, 2025
To:Mara
Yes, the Inquisitor Akuma is more experienced in Kuro-Inkjutsu, but that is his fatal limitation.
Epic non-lethal takedowns and synchronized Veils made the battle pulse with tension and teamwork! Reina's mercy-driven resolve "set them free" hit emotionally hard between the antagonists' eerie, self-shattering over-synchronization.
Dec 15, 2025
Mika's cemetery confession and parents' tragic backstory hit deep—Reina's quiet support and shared grief strengthen their bond beautifully.
Reina's nightmare and emotional breakdown reveal her deep fears of loss, beautifully contrasted by Takeshi's comforting wisdom and the team's unwavering support.
Nana's resonant awakening and solar punch incinerate the beast! Eerie humanoid silhouette hooks the mystery. However, amplify sensory details in the punch for extra oomph.
Heartwarming orphanage reunion deepens Nana and Misaki's ties—Granny's sharp intuition and military background intrigue. Gentle magical performance charms the kids!
The malfunction adds tense escalation—Reina's heroic leap was epic! Minor nitpick: more character insights would deepen emotional stakes.
The subtle intimacy between the protagonist, An'Ri, and Mai'Ri feels genuine and heartfelt, perfectly capturing his post-war loneliness amid budding connections. Rainy atmosphere amps up the melancholy.
To:Nato_otan1
I was going to sleep. But saw that Mara published another chapter. I didn't know you 2 raced for 1st place in every chapter. I thought it was a one-time thing.
Well, Sorry, Nato.
Loved the raw peek into Mel's frustration—those repetitive "stupid shit" and "idiots" make him feel armored yet cracking. Weaving boxing regrets, shifting landscapes, and Nina's jumper build subtle tension.
Dec 14, 2025
To:D. Hazane (羽實)
I will consider your feedback when I write my next novel. As you said, it can be so much better, but it is what it is now. I didn't think that much about V2. But there are ways to make V2. However, don't know if I will make it or not.
Thank you for staying with me this far. I hope you enjoyed reading this novel. I truly appreciate the time and effort you put into this novel. Again, thank you so much.