Sep 14, 2025

To:Xa

Yeah, I felt like I could go on writing for awhile in this story! Finding a reasonable stopping point for Volume 1 has been tricky. The story isn't over, but I'm hoping to wind it down a tiny bit for a clean transition to Volume 2.

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Sep 14, 2025

To:H. Shura

Glad you liked it! I'm trying to wind it down with a few Epilogue chapters so that it's not as abrupt as just the one chapter. I have a lot of ideas on how to continue the story as time goes on!

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Sep 09, 2025

To:Sen Kumo

I've always like messing with magic systems to see where unique spins can be put on them. I haven't written anything with runic magic before, so this has been a fun experiment.

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Sep 02, 2025

To:H. Shura

Glad you enjoyed it!

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Sep 02, 2025

Definitely a gamble on his part 😆

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Aug 29, 2025

To:Mai

Honestly? I feel the same 😆

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Aug 27, 2025

To:Paul Losonso

Appreciate the feedback! ❤️

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Aug 25, 2025

To:S K Lesker

I'm pretty stoked someone picked up on the mind vs body piece lol. I've done martial arts for two decades and when I thought up the idea of his power, I was like "yeah - but just cause he learns quick doesn't make him move quick"...

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Aug 25, 2025

To:H. Shura

I appreciate the feedback! I've not written many stories in a chapter-by-chapter fashion like this before, so I'm excited to hear that I'm keeping a solid tempo and interest through it!

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Aug 25, 2025

To:H. Shura

I appreciate the feedback! I've not written many stories in a chapter-by-chapter fashion like this before, so I'm excited to hear that I'm keeping a solid tempo and interest through it!

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Aug 21, 2025

To:kazesenken

The thought did cross my mind LOL

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Aug 20, 2025

To:S K Lesker

Appreciate the feedback! I do notice i have a tendency to repeat words, so hoping to improve on that over time 😀

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Aug 19, 2025

To:S K Lesker

She is great! I've enjoyed planning her story thus far

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Aug 16, 2025

To:Kuro

Appreciate the feedback! My goal was starting off with something engaging that could be built on later - glad it had that impact!

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Aug 15, 2025

To:kazesenken

LOL yeah. I'm trying to stick to 1 chapter per day until the story is finished. It's a lot of writing, but I'm enjoying the process!

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