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Aug 10, 2025
To:S K Lesker
Always love getting feedback! Glad you enjoyed the chapter
Aug 09, 2025
To:Naviel Runavi
Thanks! I will be the first to admit that this genre is out of my norm. Hoping I'm doing the real story justice!
Aug 08, 2025
To:OBI
Thanks for the feedback! Always happy to hear that the writing portrays the scene well! 😃
Aug 07, 2025
Great start! Definitely intrigued as to what's going on in her mind. Have some theories, but I'll have to keep reading to see!
Aug 06, 2025
Enjoying the premise so far! the corporate-HR-manager vibe is a really fun spin on the Isekai world. Looking forward to reading more!
Been enjoying this so far! Will have to loop back later when I have more time - I enjoyed the strong start into this chapter being a bit calmer. Excited to see what comes next!
Has been great so far! I really enjoy the premise of his role and mindset being opposite of the typical "main character". Will have to read more of it later when I have some time!
Aug 05, 2025
Love the start! Haven't gotten a chance to read a lot of web novels yet that had the strong female as their lead. Interested to see where it goes!
I really enjoyed this as a fellow SAO fan! Great to see a book in this genre doing so well with views and likes. Anything in particular that's helping get eyeballs on it, or have you found that the good writing mostly does the work for you? Either way, awesome start! 😃
Aug 03, 2025
To:Hollow
LOL yeah... Not a smooth opening for him.
Aug 01, 2025
Great initial hook! Interested to learn what transpires next.
Might seem like a strange comment, but I like how you format the lines that are his thoughts. I've seen italics used before, but the -- at the beginning really helps my brain catch that it's an internal piece of dialogue. Great story thus far!
"Wet Soggy Tofu" will live rent-free in my head next time I'm on a train. The way you describe his thoughts is on-point and resonates - which might say something about me LOL. Keep up the great work!
Jul 31, 2025
To:McMolly
Glad to hear you're enjoying it! And I'm very excited to release the next few chapters as the narrative starts to get off of the ground.