Aug 20, 2020
Once again. I'm not good at reviewing stuff. So this might be a little short. Overall, I've been really liking your writing. It's got that "professional" feel to it. From one of your comments I saw that Yui's dreams and reality were merging together, which is something that really drew me in. It's one of those things that really hooks that reader and makes them start asking questions, which is what should be happening.
Also, I really liked the flashbacks. I have always liked when stories have non linear plots but are still able to keep their structure. It's something that I'm going to do in one of my novels.
And even furthermore, I'm really liking the characters, especially Yui, but she's the main character, so I guess that's a given.
Still, I'll be sure to keep myself up to date.