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Sep 20, 2025

Interesting start so far. A few minor typos (e.g. “the torched one”), but interesting nonetheless. I think I could even make out a few latin words, which makes me guess that it’s used well. But only guess. I was never good in latin myself. Keep at it. This feels pretty original!

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:1

Sep 08, 2025

To:DYNOS

Thanks, but the rest is not as dark, but I think it sets a tone that haunts one for a while until you know why it’s there ^^

Singularity

Chapter:0

Sep 05, 2025

Hmmm … I wonder what WHAT is really looking for and if he’ll really let THEE borrow the soul …

Maizy's Tails: Mass, Memory, Disorder

Chapter:0

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

Wow. That sounds diabolical. And a bit like a Deadpool thing, where he comes around the corner and then kicks the sign over. “This can’t be over yet! Or do you want to pull a third protagonist over after that prologue?”
Though that would be a very novel approach … I mean making another new character at this point.

Singularity

Chapter:13

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

Missing letters is so frustrating. Maybe they’ve been isekai’d too?

Singularity

Chapter:9

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

I hoped I managed to keep that straight. Though color only exists with light, so I had to think about the difference that night vision usually makes. Cool that you like it!

Singularity

Chapter:8

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

Thanks. Embarrassing typo fixed -.-

Singularity

Chapter:4

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

It’s the stone’s only appearance. A very minor side-character. I think it’s crying in its corner in the monastery.

Singularity

Chapter:3

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

I was on the fence for that, since it’s something that’s being said. But I guess it’s more precise that way, so I changed it.

Singularity

Chapter:2

Sep 05, 2025

To:Riskable

Yes, that is supposed to be heaven. I edited the text. Thanks for noticing.

Singularity

Chapter:2

Aug 31, 2025

To:Enka

Well, can’t comment on the future. Those would be spoilers.

Singularity

Chapter:5

Aug 31, 2025

To:Enka

A scar is so cliché. But what else could he have? Ralf is a businessman … Though maybe he can have a beard. That would work.

Singularity

Chapter:2

Aug 31, 2025

To:Enka

I also like how the prologue turned out ^^

Singularity

Chapter:0

Aug 31, 2025

To:Blake Webb

Someone’s sensing ulterior motives? How could that happen?

*plays innocent*

Singularity

Chapter:6

Aug 31, 2025

To:Blake Webb

That’s if the god even knows what’s happening in another world. Are you implying he’s ignoring this one and likes watching parallel world television?

Singularity

Chapter:5

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