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Just a guy who writes a lot. Retired musician, hockey blogger, and avid manga consumer. I hope you enjoy the stories I write.
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Dec 22, 2025
I enjoyed the concept of a street magician being interwoven with exorcists. This feels like a pretty novel ideal, and I'm enjoying where this is heading.
Dec 16, 2025
Man, Meathead Motors. Absolutely phenomenal naming. I love how sarcastic and self aware the entire opening is.
I enjoyed how sharp the dialogue was while they were running. It's realistic how choppy and quick their back and forth is during an action sequence. Really well done there.
Those three opening paragraphs are fantastic. Maybe the best atmospheric setup you've done in the story so far.
Dec 15, 2025
As someone who enjoys a bleak I-novel, and the darker side of a troubled narrator, this is incredibly appealing in its density.
Dec 10, 2025
I enjoyed how quickly that the core cast was established, and how memorable the narration around Akane was from her introduction in this chapter.
Oct 30, 2025
To:Saraa
Yes! I used to work logistics and sound at a festival in the Midwestern United States for several years, so I mirrored much of this chapter, as well as much of this novel around my experiences from back then.
Oct 04, 2025
To:Gyges359d
Thank you! I'm usually not a big horror reader or writer, so I'm glad that it resonates with someone with a similar genre interest.
Aug 17, 2025
The premise is compelling. There are a large number of mysteries about the world that are going to be fun to see you unveil as this continues.
Aug 16, 2025
Fun start to the story. I'm really excited for the dynamics of how the old band influences the dynamics of the new one.
This is a unique and interesting concept, and the execution of the dialogue is compelling. I'm excited to see where this goes.