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CTBergeron

Just a guy who writes a lot. Retired musician, hockey blogger, and avid manga consumer. I hope you enjoy the stories I write.

registered at: Aug 15, 2025

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Dec 22, 2025

I enjoyed the concept of a street magician being interwoven with exorcists. This feels like a pretty novel ideal, and I'm enjoying where this is heading.

Empty Wand , Full Tricks

Chapter:2

Dec 16, 2025

I enjoyed how sharp the dialogue was while they were running. It's realistic how choppy and quick their back and forth is during an action sequence. Really well done there.

Moonlightning in Tokyo

Chapter:1

Dec 16, 2025

Those three opening paragraphs are fantastic. Maybe the best atmospheric setup you've done in the story so far.

Meadow on the Moon

Chapter:12

Dec 15, 2025

As someone who enjoys a bleak I-novel, and the darker side of a troubled narrator, this is incredibly appealing in its density.

Called To You

Chapter:0

Dec 10, 2025

I enjoyed how quickly that the core cast was established, and how memorable the narration around Akane was from her introduction in this chapter.

Meadow on the Moon

Chapter:1

Oct 30, 2025

To:Deleted User

Yes! I used to work logistics and sound at a festival in the Midwestern United States for several years, so I mirrored much of this chapter, as well as much of this novel around my experiences from back then.