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Hello! I am a college student who decided to pick up writing as a small hobby.

registered at: Aug 25, 2025

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Oct 03, 2025

I wonder if you have a map for this world? That would be nice.

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:10

Sep 25, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Thank you for point this out. I actually went back and fixed it so the exposition isn’t just being dumped.

The Looper and the Reincarnator

Chapter:3

Sep 21, 2025

To:kazesenken

Interesting, I was slightly worried for a sec

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Sep 11, 2025

Not sure if this is a problem on my end, but there are basically no spacing between texts. This is entirely stylistic, but I would recommend you add some spacing here and there. It’s kinda hard to read when the entire page is filled with words.

The Heroes' Parallel: Journey from World's End

Chapter:2

Sep 11, 2025

Excellent writing poise. I should take some lessons from you lol.

The Heroes' Parallel: Journey from World's End

Chapter:1

Sep 11, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Tysm! I'm glad the scene landed that way.

The Looper and the Reincarnator

Chapter:2

Sep 11, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

Tysm! I'm glad the scene landed that way.

The Looper and the Reincarnator

Chapter:2

Sep 11, 2025

This is actually really well done ngl. The decapitation scene was vivid, and though chapter 7 started a little confusing without straight-up indicating it was Markus, it's still well done. I'm gonna try to steal some of your writing techniques.

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:8

Sep 10, 2025

Pretty interesting so far. Considering the protagonist’s intelligence, maybe it would be better for the skill display to show “none” instead. By the way, I think there might be a bit of grammar fixes. For instance, maybe remove ‘even’? “Where the hell I even was.” Also, I think you need a comma after: According to Marcus. Otherwise all good.

Reincarnated into My Favorite Game, But I Forgot Everything I Knew About It

Chapter:2

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