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Sep 06, 2025

I could only imagine half-elfs being looked down upon by both the humans and the elves but I wonder if being a half-elf grants something that a human and an elf doesn't have, that only half elfs can posess?
great chapter 'w'''🤩

Half-Elf Messiah

Chapter:3

Sep 05, 2025

thanks for chapter.
Some times Lira is referred to as a he instead of she, got kind of confusing.
I like the dialogue of Lira, looking to see where this leads to next ''v''
😆

Soul’s Odyssey

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2025

To:H. Shura

Thanks so much!
I'll be sure to keep on writing, thanks being here for the journey.
❤️‍🔥

King of Cultivation

Chapter:6

Sep 05, 2025

To:theACE

That certainly is on my mind as well. but there is a good reason why that could be true!
haha , I can't disagree there, 😅Elisa hates the yellow hat as well but it is part of being a trainee in magic that the uniform is the yellow hat, it is part of the reason why she wishes to pass the test is to lose the hat for a more stylish and respectable hat.

King of Cultivation

Chapter:1

Sep 05, 2025

I'm loving every bit of it, the descriptions draw me in and I think that this is really interesting to read, I like the name's you chose and looking forward to reading more //'w'🤩

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:2

Sep 01, 2025

The air thickened with a metallic taste like molasse pressing against his chest Is one line which doesn't make sense if you think about it: does molasses thicken with a metallic taste in relation to the air? Also it would make more sense if he had a metallic taste in his mouth instead of it being in the air. I would reframe it in a way like: The taste of something metallic was left on his tongue, a heaviness pressed against him, he couldn't escape its hold. A soundless scream welled in his throat and yet no sound could be expressed.
Another suggestion is using bold to emphasize sound-effects and using it as a way to draw attention to a cliff-hanger is also really good that you can utilize!
I think this has a lot of potential and with some careful attention I can see this story unravel itself quite beautifully. ,,[(''w''..// 🤩.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

Loving the descriptions here! Great job I can picture it clear and disntictly which is good.
Here are some points I really loved: the example: weight in silence, Seraphina (perfectly fitting name) a constellation of flame against the dark. I thought was a particular line that I really enjoyed.
Now to characterization I enjoyed the banter between them all
I guess they didn't have the brains to handcuff them together so one ( Luke) wouldn't escape. I'm wondering how Sera commands so much authority, and if she has any special ability, What character comes to my mind in comparison is Morgiana from Magi, who also is a slave and is commanding and also a girl who has red hair.
Great job! <[[]w{}///😆

A Cynic's Path: Survival in Another World

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

To:DYNOS

I'm glad you think so!
😁

King of Cultivation

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

Some good work here. but I can't help wonder if that new friend that was mentioned will have any further impact onto the story or not? I hope so, or else it may feel as though unnecessary?
The description is interesting, especially: 'Half the faces wore guilt like badly-fitting masks' I like that line a lot. Keep it up ;;"w'''//😆

A Cynic's Path: Survival in Another World

Chapter:0

Sep 01, 2025

I appreciate the funnies.. ka ka ka (''w''))

My Strongest Familiar

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

Good start I wonder if he will get dragged into a dungeon himself? just what might happen? 'w''

Ashes of the Summoned: The World Without HEROES

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

Another great chapter I quite liked the broom before referred to as 'an implement of destruction' '(`°ω°// thanks for chapter

Half-Elf Messiah

Chapter:2

Aug 31, 2025

Great chapter!
Looking forward to see how this will pan out for him and if anyone will come to take advantage of him being in chains/suspects him of being a slave because of that. 'vov;; 😆

Kusunoki Naoki: Swordsman in Another World

Chapter:0

Aug 31, 2025

Love this introduction!
Looking forward to how this tale will unravel (''w''<<
🤩

Half-Elf Messiah

Chapter:1

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