Jul 14, 2022
To:Harmonica Writes
Oh you can catch up on mine whenever, and if you do (at least up to chapter 10), um, please give me your feedback: is it still funny? Do I cover the plot holes? Is my grammar improved? And other things you have in mind. Because your feedback was really helping me, for example, I focused on absurdity/comedy in some chapters, and I got positive comments (so it was good to focus on it), so I’m very grateful to you!
Thanks for updating, I enjoyed your writing, and things got me interested, so yeah, I kept reading when I had free time.