Sep 07, 2025
Heyo there, this is an interesting idea, I like the card gimmick you have going but I do have some constructive criticism. So don't read ahead if you're not in the headspace for it.
So you have some typos with Harutos name where it's typed as 'Haurto', and you should probably put more spacing between your bigger paragraphs, they feel kind of clunky. Of course outside of typos it's just my personal preference, write how you wanna
