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Caught snowflakes on my tongue I thought I knew what love was A thousand push pins on a map Only to prove I could exist Don't hold on too hard To the way that everything was.
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Oct 18, 2025
To:Ashley
That's the best compliment ever, haha, thanks Ash!
There will be not only walls that get things through. As anything can bring glory, anything can have a hole.
To:Gemini Daydream
Peakhole?
Haha, I could totally benefit from a harsh critique so throw it at me, no problem 🦷
'Came for a gloryhole' can also be an epitaph, gosh it has so many uses. The phrase I mean.
Glad you liked it <3 I really wasn't trying anything but just kinda do something 'fun for me' without thinking too much abou it.
I know deep inside you're disappointed by the lack of gloryholes so far. But there will be, trust me.
Oct 09, 2025
I liked it so far! Good introduction, if I were to nitpick something would be that it moves to quick from the moment we get introduced to the character to the mansion. That and Haruki's first impression like if he doesn't know about the mansion rumours but then acknowledging people died in there.
So far I liked looking forward to how things are gonna go from now on
Oct 07, 2025
To:Chris Zee
Thank you!
For sure, I'll check on that!
Oct 06, 2025
To:spicarie
If I tell you it doesn't get more sad than that would you trust me? haha
Oct 04, 2025
Certainly an interesting opening prologue. Got my attention, now, gotta keep reading.
To:nbrailek
Hahahaha, that means I succeeded at making an uncommon opening
Thank You for reading and taking your time to leave a comment~
It's kinda-there the tag, never was my main focus for the story.
Finding THIS among the monthly challenge stories is genuinely a breath of fresh air, and whatsmore on Halloween month? This is the kind of thing I was expecting to read in October.
Props and cheers!
Oct 02, 2025
To:Holundria
Then again; thank you.
I'm on a place where I find dialogue and monologues more interesting than describing the world around unless is stricktly needed to. I prefer to give a basic description, almost vague of the places (a house, period. For example) and leave to readers to imagine how it look. But that also might be a subtle way toshooting myself in the foot, I guess is kinda subjective at the end of the day.
To:Megane-kun
Haha, first and more importantly, thank you for reading so far!
What is is that you didn't understand?