Aug 23, 2020
For some reason, I don’t feel like I’m reading in sync with the descriptions. This is most probably due to a lack of reading other novels in like... ever. The character descriptions are awesome, but I sometimes get confused on exactly WHERE they are since I sometimes can’t differentiate between the metaphors and the actual description. Maybe it’s because it’s been a while since I encountered these specific genre tropes...
Anyway, I love the chapter and everything was conveyed clearly enough for me to get the gist of everything. Nice work. 👍 😍
