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Sep 21, 2026

Really solid first chapter, but I agree with most of the people who'd written about grammar in some places. The only real thing I can add would be sometimes splitting larger paragraphs into different beats, so it doesn't feel like a series of continuous "and then" (not saying you did this at all, just an idea).
Characterization of the narrator and his perspective is really clear for worldview and how they see other people, which is always nice. Worldbuilding really intrigued me, and i'm excited to see what comes next.

An adventurer?

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

To:Taylorclone

anytime, really.
I'm looking forward to what's in store next for this

THE Paranormal Research Club

Chapter:1

Apr 13, 2026

First chapter was, well, a really strong hook. I understand now your tone and prose a bit better, which is intriguing to say the least. I like the subtle characterizations from actions and attitude between characters, like implied history and the general feeling that the characters see things in a way we don't.
Really interesting so far, truly something good here.

THE Paranormal Research Club

Chapter:1

Feb 03, 2026

To:Prufrock

thanks for taking the time to read!

I do, looking back on it, realize that it's more of a character study rather than a romance. I regret making it a back-burner feeling but sometimes I lost sight of that. I appreciate every word and second you've taken to read this, truly.

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:19

Feb 03, 2026

To:Prufrock

it's only half of the equation too...
who knows what the other half is

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:15

Feb 03, 2026

To:Prufrock

ah, I see!

I'll try to add that in the future projects, sorry bout that!

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:13

Feb 03, 2026

To:Prufrock

i wanted it to be a staple regressive point, like how most people start with the right steps but accidentally fall into their old ways out of habit, and with nothing to keep them in check/grounded continue to live that way

I understand that though, so i'll definately try to work on it in the future!

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:13

Feb 01, 2026

really tense, had me on the edge of my seat, good shit

I Died As a JPop Idol and Now I'm a Revolutionary Songstress

Chapter:6

Jan 31, 2026

To:lolitroy

i mean sure, if you want to. I'd love to hear overall thoughts on this it's the first time i've written with someone else's premise so it'd be cool to know what other people think

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:20

Jan 29, 2026

damn
really makes you understand the pain and struggle to an almost terrifying degree, like idk painful realism? But yeah, god damn.

I Died As a JPop Idol and Now I'm a Revolutionary Songstress

Chapter:2

Jan 27, 2026

To:Prufrock

i'll get to work too, right after my midterm tomorrow!

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:1

Jan 27, 2026

To:Prufrock

i mean i know my grammar is going to be ass throughout so vibes is great! just overall ideas you get when reading really.

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2026

I tried to lessen the inner monologues and let the words speak for themselves. Sorry if it feels different, but I;m really trying to change.

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:15

Jan 14, 2026

To:lolitroy

I'll do my best to fix this i swear
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Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:14

Jan 10, 2026

To:lolitroy

if you want to see him suffer just wait until his complete breaking point LOL

Iris of Insignificance

Chapter:7

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