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Hello, the name is Rose’ my goal is pretty simple. To become the greatest Shonen author of all time.
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Sep 22, 2020
The first part was incredibly dark and I loved that so much! I’m surprised that Yui was able to function so normally after an even like that!
Sep 19, 2020
To:Ana Fowl
Thank you! I always enjoy writing the dialogue portions whenever Jo is involved so I’m glad you enjoyed that as well! I’m also happy you caught the Danganropa inspiration. The next chapter is going to be a really good one
Sep 15, 2020
CLIFFHANGER?!? What is this Attack On Titan?!? My goodness you had me on the edge of my seat and then BOOM! It’s over like that. Hands down my favorite chapter so far!
Sep 12, 2020
This training was one of my favorite little sparring matches to write so I’m glad you enjoyed! I love that Accel reference. I definitely did enjoy Magical Index, but this arc coming up is one of my favorites and it sets into motion a ton of future events
Sep 09, 2020
I’m glad you enjoyed their reunion! It’s a huge hint for something bigger to come!
Everyone’s growth as a team will be integral to the rest of the story and this chapter and the others in the future will definitely set up some huge things that are coming up!
I’m loving this world building and lore building as well. Once again Nobu and Yui’s interactions are just to die for and I hope that we continue to see more of them! I’m loving everything so far!
Sep 04, 2020
Crystal is honestly a bit of a tragic character. It’s kind of hard to root against her even though she’s up against the main case considering her past.
The feelings and growth in this particular chapter are going to set the tone for the next arc of the series which will be even better than this one.
Sep 03, 2020
To:MOB
Fights are honestly my favorite part about writing! I love to test the limits of my creativity when it comes to the choreography of my fights! I hope that you enjoyed!
I loved the Interaction between Nobu and the boy in the early stages of the chapter. I really love their dynamic and the chemistry that they have.
Also I really love how you’re presenting the magical girl concept. Me personally who has zero knowledge on that subject I appreciate the slow build and introduction. Makes it a lot easier to digest.
Sep 02, 2020
Ahhh! Thank you so much! I love Eden so much and that small scene for me really showed off the kind of person that she is! Crystal is such a fun character as well. You’ll definitely get to see more of her later on and I feel like you’ll love her!
This fight is honestly one of my favorite fights of the series. I loved how the choreography flowed as well as the dialogue that was with it. I’ll always try to surpass the last fight that I wrote so definitely have high expectations
Sep 01, 2020
Hiroshi in my opinion is best boy and you’ll see why soon enough
Aug 31, 2020
This chapter. My god. It felt like a movie. The first act describing the afterlife was breathtakingly beautiful. The symbolism and description used was fantastic.
I definitely like the slower pace of this chapter even though there was a ton of content to cover everything felt incredibly organized and the words and dialogue kept me engaged all the way to the end.
You’ll start to notice that Hiroshi definitely has a soft spot for a certain kind of people. His growth and his actions definitely are deeply rooted and big props to you for catching that.
The pacing right now is perfect for the story but later on down the line you’ll notice the pacing pick up as events start to unfold
Aug 30, 2020
Thanks! Yeah the action will be a heavy staple later on, I really strive on having great action and there will be some really dynamic fights later on the story!
Definitely noted, I really don’t know why I write the Authors Note like that but I’ll definitely switch it up come next chapter. Thank you for pointing that out for me🙏🏾
