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registered at: Nov 20, 2025

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Jan 22, 2026

To:Stoneflew

Yeah 😆, don't worry, I haven't edited it, I meant that I would do it later when the contest period is over

OVERHEAT - The Errant's Odyssey

Chapter:1

Jan 21, 2026

To:Stoneflew

Hi Stoneflew! Thanks a lot for the feedback!
You're absolutely right about the tense consistency, when I first started writing, I was experimenting with which narrative tense fit the story best, and a few remnants slipped through. That's something I’m planning to clean up in a final polish pass.

I’m really glad you found it engaging, and that Seth’s situation already feels like it’s heading somewhere dangerous, that’s exactly what I wanted to get across

Thanks again for reading!

OVERHEAT - The Errant's Odyssey

Chapter:1

Jan 20, 2026

To:Bubbles

Hi Bubbles! Thanks for reading my work. The author’s note was written by me; I simply used a more formal tone than usual because I wanted to present my novel in a professional way.

OVERHEAT - The Errant's Odyssey

Chapter:0

Jan 17, 2026

To:MIA VALENTINA SAENZ

Thanks, I hope you enjoy the story!

OVERHEAT - The Errant's Odyssey

Chapter:0

Jan 16, 2026

I loved the dynamic between Cato and Tenki, they are two interesting characters

Worlds Apart

Chapter:1

Jan 16, 2026

I liked the fight sequence with the angel, and Isaac's dialogues

Monday Morning God

Chapter:1

Jan 16, 2026

The story is good, but you need to add more line spacing, because its hard to read.

Cultivation of Freedom

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