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Jan 10, 2026

NGL, I was hoping he'd do like:

419,275 into Strength
296,231 into defense
284,985 into speed
2,450 into intelligence
2,455 into magic power
447,011 into magic defense

That way, his stats would be:
HP: 10,750,000/10,750,000
MP: 5,100,000/5,100,000
Strength: 425,000
Defense: 300,000
Speed: 300,000
Intelligence: 5,000
Magic Power: 5,000
Magic Defense: 500,000
Free Attribute Points: 3,203

This would make him plenty strong enough, while also allow him to capitalize on his most valuable support aspect (being able to make large quantities of potions).

The fact that he can mass produce potions alone makes him practically a walking dungeon, and with over 5m MP, he could make tier 2 Experience potions as well.

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Chapter:50

Jan 04, 2026

To:ali22222

Okay, that makes a lot more sense.
Though it would be nice to have gotten a line explaining the bathroom part.
Something along the lines of:
"Better to wait.
And he was right.
The creature appeared again from the same place it had vanished earlier.
It took more meat, ate it quickly, and put the raw meat back over the fire.
After that, [the creature went into the woods, relived itself, and returned to the fire only for it to disappear again].
For some time, Gri continued watching.
The creature appeared again and again-eating meat and disappearing-then returning and eating again."

My addition/alterations are in the brackets.
It's only a dozen or so words' difference.
Just enough to give the reader an idea of Alisar's routine, without going into any actual detail and making people uncomfortable.

Although now that I think about it, he should also be going to the river to drink as well (training's definitely sweaty work, and you'd need increased water intake to compensate).

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Chapter:43

Jan 03, 2026

Wait... we were like a month real (objective) time into his being in this world, and he'd experienced about 6-8 months(?) subjective time.

Now we're two months objective time and 13yrs 2mo 4 days subjective time?
The dude must be in his mid30s to early 40s at LEAST!
Are we going to get confirmation on stats drastically slowing the aging process explain this?

Also... Gri the goblin saw him each time he came and went for months or years (that one animal couldn't have been enough meat for the whole 12yrs, so he had to be moving around doing this repeatedly and this is just the one Gri witnessed).

And in all that time, Alisar NEVER left to go to the bathroom.
Pretty sure Gri would have noticed and been utterly in awe and shock if the guy walking off for a few minutes each feeding session to power-blast a literal hill of raw human sewage at the base of some poor tree or something.s

So clearly this is a habit, and the dude hasn't taken a dump or a piss in at LEAST 12yrs... or if he has, he's been doing so ENTIRELY in the training room and... stockpiling it in a corner or something. 🤮

Man, the SMELL in there... YIKES! 😂😂😂

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Chapter:43

Jan 02, 2026

I know my comments up til now have only been pointing out editing mistakes or commentary, but I only bother to do so because I'm enjoying the story and emotionally invested in the character.

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Chapter:42

Jan 02, 2026

Loving the story so far, keep it up!

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Chapter:42

Jan 02, 2026

The story is duplicated almost in it's entirety.
From part way through the word "interrogation" in the first few words of the sentence, all the way to the last sentence of the story.

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Chapter:40

Jan 02, 2026

IIRC, Damon was an entirely different character in the original version.
Wasn't he the high (5th) rank adventurer holding the wall during the dungeon waves in the first version of the story?
Now he's just the brother of the back alley swindler.

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Chapter:25

Jan 02, 2026

"Considering that my mana refills by about a thousand points every three hours, I can essentially afford one health potion every three hours."
There are 3600 seconds in an hour.
3600 x 3 = 10,800
10,800 / 1000 = 10.8

Given he said "about", im gonna assume it's 1mp per 11 seconds.
Depending on how much MP a beginner magic attack uses, that's either just okay, or truly, horrifically bad.
IE, if a magic attack costs you 10mp per use, an adventurer with a purely magic attack build at lv20 could MAYBE afford 200 attacks before depleting his reserves.

At 11s per point, that'd take a minute 50 seconds PER attack worth of mana regenerated.
And that's only at lv20 with a lv1 attack spell.
Even if that's enough to one-shot most lv1-10 enemies, an archer firing an arrow at a leisurely pace of 1 per 5 seconds (with a skilled archer easily able to fire about 1 per 3 seconds on average) could have fired 22 arrows for every single shot the mage gets.

We've already established that storage abilities exist and are fairly common and that basic arrows are cheap as dirt, so mass ammo carrying capacity isn't a huge issue.

The only way I can see magic being worthwhile is if the regen rate grows more-or-less linearly with capacity (IE, a higher lv mage with like 20,000MP regenerating magic at a rate of one MP every 1.1 seconds, instead of one MP per 11 seconds).

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Chapter:8

Jan 01, 2026

There's a decent few paragraphs that repeat twice.

Specifically the part that starts with:
"But that's good, then," I said. "In the future I could create lots of potions once I level up. That could save many lives."

And ends with:
A chill ran down my spine.

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