Oct 22, 2020
To:QI
Edited. Changed some of the commas. And also explained why she's both introverted and extroverted at the same time. About Serena's character, it'll take some time to fully understand, I mean it's just the first chapter. Well, in a way this is a backstory but this is where it begins! If this was a normal book, it'd have around 10 pages, I think that's okay for this, anyway, there's a time skip at the end of the first chapter.
Thanks a lot for the review, I really needed some criticism, it already made this better.