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Writer, curator, somnambulist
Writes and enjoys urban fantasy, romantasy, drama, occasionally horror.
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Jan 26, 2026
The initial "blurb" about the book caught my attention because of the unusual pairing of a host and a politician's daughter, but I was pulled in by the dark undertow in this chapter. I greatly enjoyed how you opened with motifs of hands and hinted at Kaho's deafness before you revealed it. Can't wait to see where this takes her and Shuhei.
To:Endymion | Prufrock
Thank you Endymion! I appreciate your time to read and comment. I wonder if I should have made it more obvious what "kind" of story this is off the bat, or if I should allow the world to keep revealing itself naturally as Gabe shows it to us. I'll be thinking about that, thank you!
Jan 25, 2026
To:Crys Meer
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. While the “inspections” theme might feel especially relevant right now, at its heart this is a story about carving out a safe space and protecting what matters most. I promise that even through the darkness, there will be light. Thanks for reading!
I’ve been reading this a while, you know I love it. But I really like how the dialogue flows in these last two chapters especially; and I really enjoyed reading Yuame and Yasu-hime’s interactions. I think the sense of character is really rich even in a recently introduced character, and it’s believable too. He feels like people I've known.
I also really enjoy Yasu’s poetry xD