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Samuel Ben

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Mar 31, 2026

this is a nice chapter. I had to press follow because of how good it is.

I like your style of writing

Zone Of The End [Reincarnated as a goblin; A progression fantasy XIanxia]

Chapter:1

Mar 31, 2026

slow down and also this thing is annoying

LiCangTian

Chapter:5

Mar 31, 2026

your doing too much telling, and it's ruins immersion

LiCangTian

Chapter:4

Mar 31, 2026

you need to fix this issue.

also you need to calm your pacing down, it's too fast

LiCangTian

Chapter:4

Mar 31, 2026

what. this is truly surprising, so how did she actually end it.

also you can actually slow down pacing and not be too fast. like the exam which could have introduced new characters even if briefly that would appear later.

also as I read you novel and some others, I noticed that they are shorter than other platforms

Solve Everythings

Chapter:3

Mar 30, 2026

To:AnggaraDezz

just normal, I wanted to post my novel soon enough on this platform and just wanted to help other authors if I see the chance as that's how I am

Solve Everythings

Chapter:2

Mar 30, 2026

so yeah I would recommend doing less tell and more show and this will make it better

LiCangTian

Chapter:3

Mar 30, 2026

this was good although I feel like you shouldn't have dumped too much info like this at once, it would be better if we discovered this as we are reading and also what do you mean by SSS+ for talent and then the emperor introducing infinity for talent, I'm actually confused.

LiCangTian

Chapter:3

Mar 30, 2026

To:leeann wang

that's bad, have you checked if you can fix it

LiCangTian

Chapter:2

Mar 30, 2026

I love it although I will say it , the MC dream ability is simply more broken that his fist one and by far.

also the thing is too joint together and also I need it longer

LiCangTian

Chapter:2

Mar 30, 2026

this is what I call a good chapter 1.

establish the power system without making it boring or too much, establish the MC motivation and also the pathways

LiCangTian

Chapter:1

Mar 29, 2026

also please it could really help you if you remove the s at the ending of the name as it makes it hard for someone to find it or you can keep it since it's your novel

Solve Everythings

Chapter:2

Mar 29, 2026

you need to post the next chapter soon, this id you can maintain it might be in my top 3 best post war novels and I have read a lot

Solve Everythings

Chapter:2

Mar 29, 2026

I like how it's progressing especially with the people who took the drugs and the way Lindsey is showing more and more feats of uncanny intelligence

Solve Everythings

Chapter:2

Mar 29, 2026

good, it seems that the gap in the first chapter was just for that chapter, also I never thought about using like a name or something like Bob 1,2,3 when writing before those characters are actually mentioned by name. this could be so useful for me

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