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Apr 02, 2026

no, the goblin whole thing is literally feeling like normal.humans but just changes description

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So, I'm A Goblin In The Demon King's Army?

Chapter:2

Apr 02, 2026

the MC was too accepting of death, also he didn't really try and think of any other thing, also in the chapter 1 when he dies, you need to fix it

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So, I'm A Goblin In The Demon King's Army?

Chapter:1

Apr 02, 2026

also do more spacing for your chapters, it's too clogged

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Chapter:0

Apr 02, 2026

love the build up and characterization although the final ending when he dies is not well done, it's literally just rushed from him requesting to just dying, like even his reaction too Is just not well done

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So, I'm A Goblin In The Demon King's Army?

Chapter:0

Apr 02, 2026

I don't know what happened to you or what but it's literally April 2nd and you have not posted any new chapters

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:5

Apr 02, 2026

this is definitely unique although also puzzling.

also the Lisa is annoying me especially when she shouted at the MC because he was basically emotionless in this whole thing

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:4

Apr 02, 2026

put d at the end of words like the servants hands trembled, instead of tremble

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:4

Apr 02, 2026

Although there are some areas you should work on.

like the Fee years, you should change that to 30 years, also you sometimes use words that indicate the wrong action

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:3

Apr 02, 2026

I have to press that follow as your writing is honestly very nice, like quite good

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:3

Apr 02, 2026

also please try and reduce the earth references

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:2

Apr 02, 2026

Although the MC is being a bit somehow

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:2

Apr 02, 2026

this is good writing. a nice pace that gives the maximum amount of information in the least amount of time

An Unknown Webnovel About Progression

Chapter:2

Apr 01, 2026

this is so stupid.

we already have the fact that she can see the future although she couldn't see what he would do.

then we have the fact that MC didn't even think of grubs friends even once when he knew the human were killing goblins up and about yet he has the chance to escape and goes and attacks the human which makes no sense as why, that's just stupid.

it's like why I said the MC is stupid ever since because he is, there was so much potential but your rushing it too much and the MC character is not fully consistent

Zone Of The End [Reincarnated as a goblin; A progression fantasy XIanxia]

Chapter:14

Apr 01, 2026

why.

this whole seer that can see the future, the MC if it wasn't for the fact that he kept saying his name over and over again and just casually does an action without thinking.

also I'm not going to lie, not really a fan of how things are moving

Zone Of The End [Reincarnated as a goblin; A progression fantasy XIanxia]

Chapter:13

Apr 01, 2026

too fast.

This getting put in the military before this war and all counld have easily been a mini arc and you could have given like 4 or 5 chapters for it and it wouldn't ruin pacing because you are rushing a bit too fast

Zone Of The End [Reincarnated as a goblin; A progression fantasy XIanxia]

Chapter:12