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ThouArtAquaholic

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registered at: Apr 20, 2026

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Oct 10, 2026

To:Stellaria

Oh yeah nice reference here, AC does have that mechanic. Now that I think of it, there's a great deal of inspiration I could have taken there (in AC Unity you could throw money on the ground to fade in with the crowd) so it's cool you noticed

The Lustrous Blank, The Overlord, The Undying Flame

Chapter:3

Oct 05, 2026

To:Kei

Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed.

Three-Fold Sticky Note.

Chapter:6

Oct 02, 2026

To:Stellaria

They wouldn’t be the greatest syndicate of thieves if they didn’t rizz a king or two 👍

The Lustrous Blank, The Overlord, The Undying Flame

Chapter:2

Sep 30, 2026

That’s a really good introduction I’m actually impressed!

Cloud Nine

Chapter:1

Sep 30, 2026

Thought about giving this a read to repay your favor, and so far I like it!
This style of writing (screenplay-like?) is new to me but I don’t mind it.
Although for a first chapter I thinks it’s bit long, not a serious issue but I would’ve split it in two. Despite the few moments where I was confused the story’s good.
I also relate with Mina since I had the same thoughts of wanting to be more expressive before, I wonder how she’ll get over that hurdle, especially with how her powers will not make it easy.

Splitting Image

Chapter:1

Sep 30, 2026

To:Stellaria

Thanks for your review! It's true that I rushed it a bit since the deadline was pretty close, still no excuse for not polishing it though. I'll make sure to pay more attention to the text next time. Hope you enjoyed!

The Lustrous Blank, The Overlord, The Undying Flame

Chapter:1

Sep 16, 2026

I really liked the start well done!

Blood Sugar Rush!

Chapter:1

Aug 04, 2026

Chapter after chapter my expectations were blown away, I really learned reading this story, absolutely loved it! 👍

The Red Knight

Chapter:3

Jul 11, 2026

To:Shizori

Glad I could help 👍

The Mofumofu Chasing Degenerate: I Defied a Royal Decree Just to Pet a Legendary Fenrir!

Chapter:4

Jul 11, 2026

I liked the concept of this story, imagine fighting the hero for the sake of fluffiness. If there's one advice I could give is that the scenes are not descriptive enough, and at times it's difficult to understand what's happening. Taking more time to shape up each scene and the characters could be a way to remedy the problem.

The Mofumofu Chasing Degenerate: I Defied a Royal Decree Just to Pet a Legendary Fenrir!

Chapter:4

Jun 11, 2026

To:Moon

Yeah it was a bad choice of words, I meant it as in the way of speaking is different (The time-traveler being a lot more casual and rough than the lumberjack)
But glad you're enjoying yourself so far.

Testumori: The Red haired elf will Definitely Absolutely NOT fall in love with the human-like robot.

Chapter:2

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