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Oct 20, 2026

To:Stoneflew

I'm quite proud of the lil' goober.

MONSTERS

Chapter:26

Oct 20, 2026

And the journey is over. Almost sad to see it go, but it was a fun one.
Had plenty of expectation slowly simmer the more I read, some you met whilst others you exceeded.
Fantastic work. Genuinely wish there was more.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:48

Oct 13, 2026

Ever more mysterious. As it turns out, our narrator may just be of the unreliable sort. Interesting.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:29

Oct 13, 2026

Ya know, Sels character is just so damn perfect. An amazing companion with the right amount of sass and sarcasm but also concern.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:26

Oct 13, 2026

To:Stoneflew

Can a man be a hero if he does monstrous things for the sake of others?

Not to get philosophical, still in the infancy of my writing, but I hope to be able to tackle that kinda stuff properly one day.

MONSTERS

Chapter:18

Oct 13, 2026

To:Stoneflew

Yes! A thing I love in fantasy is just small little noticeable things, that on their own are cool but when fitting into the overall world just make it more livid in. Something I strive for.

MONSTERS

Chapter:14

Oct 11, 2026

Fascinating. So the chains could always send him back, I thought they'd just resurrect him. I suppose if his bodies too far destroyed then its better to revert back to a point.
Is this then the first time he's gone back to the beginning when the chains were first bound to him?

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:20

Oct 11, 2026

Really got me thinking on what is the turning point that made his sister evil.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:18

Oct 11, 2026

The dynamic between Sels and Lonni (Dyste) are just *chefs kiss*.

Also despite with how little time Yoive gets, his characterization is immediate and strong. Don't know what you'd call the character type but it reminds me Ygor from Avantris. Love it.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:16

Oct 11, 2026

Super yell - hehe, we believe in you Sels, you can do it.

Interesting, so just to clarify, there are multiple variants of gryphons it seems. Since Sels is specifically noted to have a long, goose like neck but this new gryphon father was called hawk-like. Real cool if that's the case.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:15

Oct 11, 2026

To:Stoneflew

*Rubs hands* Oh, its all coming together.

MONSTERS

Chapter:12

Oct 11, 2026

To:Stoneflew

With how broken I intended to make magic, there was no chance of him escaping. Specially when the ace up that parties' sleeve focuses on magic for disabling opponents.

Also super happy that his expressions come through really well, given that its more close-third person. Afraid I might have been overdoing it.

MONSTERS

Chapter:6

Oct 10, 2026

To:Stoneflew

I had an idea to do something similar with the languages but alas just don't have the skill to execute it correctly. So (un)fortunately, they're all talking the same language.

MONSTERS

Chapter:5

Oct 09, 2026

Guess that spirit did in fact not enjoy her ruckus behaviour and desecration of the sacred springs.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:7

Oct 09, 2026

Wonder what the narrative the crown is spinning since everyone seems to think the heir-prince is dead yet here he is running about through a village.

Cracks Carved in the Chains

Chapter:4

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