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Apr 11, 2021
To:Ana Fowl
Thanks for the feedback
Apr 09, 2021
To:Bubbles
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it. I will definitely take the sentence structure into consideration. Most of the X did Y scenarios came into place because I had been going for a narrative style at the time. I will try to adjust the structure to flow a little better with less repetitions. I just finished my draft for Chapter 2, although it may still have some of that repetitious sentence structure for now, a few new elements will be introduced there. I'll make a few edits to it where I can and get it published. I hope you continue to enjoy the series. I'd love to see your feedback on it once I get it finished up.
See ya around! -Jae 3
Apr 08, 2021
I'm glad your interested! Thank you for your support. I will write continued chapters in this series as often as is comfortable for me. I promise not to overwork myself 😅
To:Workaholics inc
Thank you for the kind words 😁