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Feb 26, 2026

lowkirkentuily the way this jestermaxxes for the readerfoids is giving deadass. Like, I got negative jerstergooning aura here type shit. Idk if the cortisol levels are high yet but its giving.

I Think I'm in Love with the Brain-Rotted Boy Who Shouts "67!" in Class.

Chapter:1

Feb 16, 2026

Chess boxing yuri?????????

JAB★CROSS★CHECKMATE

Chapter:1

Feb 12, 2026

MOOOO!

Where Things Won't Grow

Chapter:3

Feb 12, 2026

MOOOoooo?

Where Things Won't Grow

Chapter:1

Feb 11, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

He wasn't feeling skibidi enough

Something’s Wrong With June

Chapter:3

Feb 11, 2026

Hi there! First of all, congrats on finishing, especially with such a long novel. I've been thinking of this one a bit and have some thoughts.

To start out, I think the first few chapters are fantastic. The way this throws you right into Miya's suicide attempt, showing the general horrors of her life, is very gripping and does a good job setting the tone.

It's in the middle where I think things get a bit more mushy. There are times where it feels like the same chapters are repeated over and over again, and while I think the characters, especially Mukashi and his clear decline mentally here, do shine. But amidst the monotony, it starts to kind of fall flat.

I want to highlight Mukashi again here, because I think he's by far the best part of the book. You do a fantastic job overall with him, showing his mental state, and just having his perspective both be similar and different from Maya's.

If the novel were a bit shorter and cut out a good chunk of the fat, and sped things up a bit with a lot less filler, I think it could really shine, but in its current state, the inconsistent slow pacing and pov changes that largely detract from the story and hamper its potential.