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aaa

Sep 09, 2025

Ok finished! Not to pass the criticism off to Bubbles, but she encapsulates most of what I had in mind while reading this, esp with the hook. Anyway, keep it up!

Kitezh the Invisible Phenomenon

Chapter:1

Sep 09, 2025

Viewmaxxing

Incomprehensible Simplicity

Chapter:0

Sep 09, 2025

To:BlipXP

Fish

RiverLight

Chapter:6

Sep 09, 2025

To:BlipXP

Insightful

RiverLight

Chapter:5

Sep 04, 2025

To:BlipXP

She just wants Yuri

RiverLight

Chapter:3

Sep 02, 2025

To:kazesenken

Like all tutorials should be

RiverLight

Chapter:3

Sep 02, 2025

To:kazesenken

This is cannon now LMAOOOO

RiverLight

Chapter:2

Sep 02, 2025

To:Darkholis

Thank you so much for reading!!!

RiverLight

Chapter:3

Sep 02, 2025

To:TheWriteKC

McDonald’s will eventually isekai us all

RiverLight

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2025

Good work so far. Main thing I'd say is that so far everything feels very wordy, I feel you improve the book a bit by making things a bit more streamlined. Good luck with the contest!

Singularity : The Arrival

Chapter:3

Sep 02, 2025

Don't you hate it when a stranger appears and says they're to marry you? Happens all the time here smh smh

These Fated Threads: Volume 1

Chapter:2

Aug 30, 2025

To:Random_8teen

Thanks for reading!

RiverLight

Chapter:1

Aug 29, 2025

To:BlipXP

Yuri soon

RiverLight

Chapter:2

Aug 26, 2025

To:kazesenken

Ok but Japanese McDonads kinda slaps lowkey

RiverLight

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

E E G G G

RiverLight

Chapter:1