Sep 08, 2021
okay so im done with the story. Heres my opinions.
1) the main few characters are really lovable. Maybe there might have been a bit too many chars, but the main ones were very lovable. Specially reed and elly
2) The first part of the story is slow, but that's not a big problem for readers who've committed themselves to finish the book. The book gets intense by the second half.
3) although the novel gave me harry potter vibes, you should take pride in yourself, I consider ur book a much more interesting read.
4) although the first few chapters were very long, and slow, it might really turn off most readers idk but as the middle and end parts, the chapters have become the perfect size + intense scenes, so its amazing!
5) normally epilogues are supposed to be short, urs is LOL 2 whole huge chaps. And I don't really see much of a point in having to end the story with a 2 chap long epilogue. an epilogue is to tie loose ends and show a sequel material, tbh, i think u forgot to make the epilogue suspencey for the next volume. (sorry if I'm being harsh)
6) and the final opinion. See I'm not very good at reading in the first place, I'm not a reader, but U got me to read this on my own. Like ok yea, the first few chaps were slow and i probably felt like stopping, but once i reached the middle part, it just kept getting more intense and intense and i was reading on my own like omg, i don't even read and now I'm binge reading lol
7) sorry, I'm not very good at giving constructive criticism. i can only tell, whether i enjoyed it or not, and the answer is I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!
8) Workaholic, if ur reading this, I called it first, reed best girl!
