Jul 11, 2023
To:Bubbles
Following on from chapter one, again completely agreed. I’m not doing a very good trying to get rid of the commas, a bad habit I’ve had for a while. Though I’ve gone through a few of the upcoming chapters to hopefully remedy this.
I think I panicked when I saw the recommendation on words per chapter, as last year I had a good amount of people drop my work after a chapter or two. Obviously this was due to the quality but I figured it might be an idea to shorten the chapters as to not scare anyone away.
I’ve changed this, the chapters are still shorter than 2000 words but I’ve tried to add more to important scenes so that should hopefully resolve the pacing issues.
Again, thank you so much for your advice. I’ll go back through the previous chapters when I can and format them a bit better using your advice and what I received from other kind souls. Thanks for reading thus far!