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Once the comp ends, I'm hoping to post some other stuff. Please let me know where I can improve!

registered at: Jul 01, 2021

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Jun 15, 2026

To:Literate_Manul

Glad you liked it!

I did have plans to return to it eventually with Flint & Penny digging her out again just for fun so we’ll see

Glint!

Chapter:3

Jun 15, 2026

To:Literate_Manul

The worry aint Esmeralda tho, get turned to valuable gems and the other of the idiot duo is gonna try to make a move 😩

Glint!

Chapter:2

Jun 14, 2026

Love your dialogue, your characters are well discernible because of it. I’d recommend trying to space things out a bit more because it’s a little confusing in places.

Reborn in Vayne

Chapter:1

Jun 14, 2026

Damn… never been so happy to not live by the sea!

Really enjoyed the read, though I will say I’m worried for your protagonist’s mental state. If I heard that even once I’m moving

Umi

Chapter:2

Jun 13, 2026

To:Literate_Manul

Thanks man! The story really banks on Penny & Flint being likeable so that’s a relief. Hope the next chapters live up to it

Glint!

Chapter:1

Jun 12, 2026

To:Mara

Ah, thought it was strange seeing their other comments. Thanks for the heads up

Glint!

Chapter:2

Jun 12, 2026

To:Deleted User

Thanks, glad you like it. fire away, I’m all ears

Glint!

Chapter:2

Jan 30, 2026

To:Sleepy KeyHolder

Ah the triple B’s, a dream to never be…

Glad ya enjoyed!

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:2

Dec 16, 2025

To:Taylor J

Thanks for the support man! Sorry I just got round to replying, appreciate the comments

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:20

Nov 29, 2025

To:Taylor J

My man’s gut is made of titanium 😩

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:13

Nov 29, 2025

To:Taylor J

Well ya know, heart of the cards and all that

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:12

Nov 19, 2025

To:Taylor J

Yeah! Ass kickings for Täter!

Thanks for reading thus far, and congrats on making the top 10 ^^

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:11

Nov 17, 2025

Thanks everyone that has read, left comments or liked. I’m frustrated I didn’t make the 10 finalists but it just means this wasn’t good enough. I’ll keep trying to get better so keep your eyes out for more to come, and thank you for your support

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:36

Nov 17, 2025

To:Taylor J

Arata being a Japanese Dr Strange right now, only one timeline leads to victory!

Thanks for your comments!

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:10

Nov 16, 2025

To:Taylor J

Some say ol Geboren is with the mountain elders… they love a good shouting match, most likely on account of the strange herbs…

Thanks for your comments!

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:9

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