Mar 18, 2024
I'm so impressed that someone is actually writing a chess themed novel. As a fellow chess enthusiast and a writer, I will read all your work and provide my thoughts.
For the first chapter, I think it was very solid. I see that you have included ideas of pawn promotion and en passant. The game itself was a bit topsy turvy. Let's not focus on the games themselves for now.
I like the idea of creating an underground chess organization and a world chess federation. The death aspect gives it more impact. Please continue writing this series. I would love to read it.
