Aug 11, 2021
To:znf
Wow, thank you so much for your feedback, I find it precious, and I am so grateful that you have read this far as well. I'm glad you liked it, in this arc I intend to unite the two issues I raised in Stolen Vows, which is Kazuta's father and his best friend, Ren. I took a little break but now I will start writing again, this time aware of what you commented. Maybe I am repeating myself anyway, I will be more careful about that.
About the old man, he is mysterious because we still have no idea who he is and his primary intentions, so he sounds confusing, not only to the reader but also to the protagonist himself... I hope I can answer this in a satisfactory way as well.
Again, thank you for your comment, criticism always improves us, and I am super grateful 🙇🏻♀️