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Aug 21, 2021

this was one of the best chapters, I enjoyed it a lot, congratulations for coming here and dedicating yourself to writing, I genuinely enjoyed it. I'll read the next one even though it may be the last of that arc.🕵️

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Chapter:20

Aug 21, 2021

the only thing i found strange was that kazuta was not in shock after seeing her father be beaten, it would be interesting to put a block to explain this possible state. besides that complaint, it was a good chapter and I'm curious to know what will happen at the end of this arc. By the way, maybe you get 20k views at the end of Shells and Bodies, I hope that happens.🕵️‍♂️

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Chapter:19

Aug 19, 2021

Wow, this was really unexpected, the complicated situation between mizuki and naoki was already involved and we knew very well what had happened, but I didn't think there were these "buts" in the middle of everything that happened between them, this turnaround was very interesting

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Chapter:18

Aug 18, 2021

it was nice to see that Yui and Ren had a deeper relationship than it initially appeared, I liked that. the only thing that left me with a flea behind my ear was the reaper stating that maybe the memories he's showing to kazuta weren't 100% true, it sounded a little weird, but it's too early to make assumptions and i think you will have an answer to that in the future.

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Chapter:17

Aug 17, 2021

rumo ao top 5 do site🕵️‍♂️

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Chapter:16

Aug 17, 2021

The moments between mizuki and ren were the best things in this chapter, firstly because it continued to show us more facets of the two characters, of course we had already seen this more fragile side of ren in Stolen Vows and this needy side of Mizuki in Such a glass, but here this was shown in a more intense way and contributed not only to the characterization (even more) of the two separately, but also to the construction of a more natural relationship between the two.

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Chapter:16

Aug 06, 2021

the situation with ren's family is very interesting and it looks like he will have a promising future as a character, i also liked the introduction of kazuta's family in this situation, it makes the conflict more tense and personal for both sides, the possibility of there being a development of both parties is very High. the kazuta again being characterized and facing his inner demons, I hope these events resonate for a long time in our protagonist's mind and that he can overcome them.

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Chapter:10

Aug 06, 2021

kazuta's father seems to be a good character, I want to see more of him.🕵️‍♂️

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Chapter:9

Aug 05, 2021

kazuta's friends have finally been introduced, and I believe they will be further developed. Kazuta's relationship with his father looks interesting, let's see how it develops.

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Chapter:8

Aug 02, 2021

Kazuta is gradually evolving and that's good, its development is more palpable for those who are reading, keep it up and we'll have a great character on a great journey. I'm not sure what to expect from this new arc, but I think I have an idea of the topic you're going to cover and look forward to the next few chapters.🤔

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Chapter:7

Jul 30, 2021

kazuta🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

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Chapter:5

Jul 30, 2021

I liked the kazuta facing something he neglected and being learning from it. the bullying situation is ok, I think it will be developed later. and I also liked the hook at the end, we'll see what the fifth chapter will show us.🙃

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Chapter:4

Jul 28, 2021

Hina's situation intrigues me more and more, and my interest in her has increased after this third chapter, she is apparently bullied. is a difficult topic to be developed, I hope everything works out. I also found the conflict between the kazuta and the old quite interesting, I hope this continues to develop throughout the arc, it has a lot of potential.

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Chapter:3

Jul 27, 2021

ichise and rena😈

I'm very interested in Hina and Kazuta. there seems to be something very interesting about their past.

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Chapter:2

Jul 25, 2021

great prologue, i'm waiting for the next chapter.🕵️‍♂️

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