Aug 11, 2021
Oh, that was some interesting lore :) I like the names too, Constitution of Reality, Iodine Vapor, and The Pandemonium have a nice ring to them! The relationship between Netty and Runo is growing. And the best way for a meaningful death is to care about the characters XD So it has me a bit worried that torso monster is going to eat one of them!
I noticed a shift in your writing style this time around, too! This chapter had a lot of the information told through Dolly's specific perspective, which is cool! The other chapters were good too, but I did notice that they took more of a God's eye view and told what everyone was doing, where as this chapter was seen mostly through Dolly's eyes :)