Jan 12, 2022
Very clever with that cold water steaming off her hot body, it's a nice attention to detail. Gas bills must be nice too
Sep 05, 2021
Well, that was a wild ride. Forgetting the past was a theme followed through the whole novel, and realistically, Emiko's only real anchors were Daiki and the wagon. I think the realization of what she now has gained and choosing it over the past proves how much more she's grown and developed, changed from clinging to a past. Just the level of attachment to Daiki alone pinpoints how hard of a decision this must have been, but with a final climax she makes her choice. Solid one, good job!
Aug 12, 2021
Feeling more and more like an adventure quest, I like it.
Aug 10, 2021
Wow, the detail you placed in these scenes paints a great picture in my mind.
Aug 08, 2021
Nice dark potential, left me feeling a lot of intrigue.
Aug 03, 2021
I'm glad that things are starting to kick up, excited for the next chap