Hello there! Criticism is more than welcome, I want to get better in order to make greater content!

Yo, this is my first time writing, but I'm very confident that its gonna be a banger. My writing skills may not be great but Im confident about the plot. Please feel free to read through and tell me how it is! Please vote for me on October 3rd-oct 9th. I'd really appreciate it!!! follow me on insta! or dm me on discord!!! Real Aire#9248

Your average author hoping to get reviews on his work. Please follow back and stay tune for more chapters! Any feedback is great feedback! Underground author just out here creating, and trying to get works out. Instagram: @miyamato.musashi @kaidousbagua

Just trying to make stories. Feel free to give them a read and leave a comment, thank you.