Aug 21, 2021
To:Deleted User
Hello there TokyoFox, glad you liked the story :) Psychology Handbook looks interesting, a female ex-mafia queen protagonist analyzing psychology from a first-person POV is very intimate and will tie a bunch of readers in! The only criticism I can offer is that the grammar seems to be a bit clunky at times, but the message does get across so hopefully it won't be much of a problem! I wish you success friend!
