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Simply Average And Ordinary....Nothing More Nothing Less
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Aug 21, 2017
To:chesarka
Thank you for pointing out the stuff that you didn't get. You confirmed my initial suspicions about the synopsis and the first chapter. I needed to know whether I was being too vague or if the point I made was being portrayed properly. I'll start improving it right away and I will definitely try to find a way to differentiate between thought and actual speech.