Chapter 1:
Final Verdict
Scene: White space fills everything for several seconds.
Scene: The white transitions to someone's POV staring up at the sky.
POV: Their eyes drift from the sky across the grassy field surrounding them.
Distant Voice: A voice mutters something too distant to make out.
Distant Voice: -rui.
POV: A blink.
Distant Voice: Warui.
Warui: His eyes open beneath a tree in the middle of the grassy field.
Field: Trees are scattered throughout the grass. Wind passes through their leaves and moves Warui's hair.
Warui: He blinks a few times.
Chena: Warui.
Warui: He turns his head toward her.
Chena: She stands holding a woven basket of apples and a silver necklace with a square pendant hangs from her neck.
Warui: Huh?
Chena: I'm telling your mom you didn't even help me pick any apples.
Warui: Wait no, I can get one right now.
Warui: He reaches for an apple above him on a branch.
Chena: I've got enough.
Warui: He drops his arm.
Chena: She lifts the basket in her right hand, showing Warui that it is filled to the top with apples and walks past Warui.
Chena: Come on, I want to give these to our parents already.
Warui: He turns to follow her. A silver necklace with a square pendant hangs from his neck as well.
Chena: You're so weird you know.
Chena: Why were you zoning out like that?
Warui: [Softly]. Oh the...
Field: A breeze blows across the field from their right.
Warui: His hair blows gently with the wind.
Warui: The wind was calming.
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Warui and Chena: Continue along the path as the two approach a town.
Town Entrance: A woman leans against a fence post.
Warui: He skips, then breaks into a jog toward her.
Warui: Mom!
Warui's Mom: She pushes herself away from the fence and steps forward.
Warui: He stops a few steps in front of her.
Warui's Mom: You two took your time.
Chena: She catches up and stops beside Warui.
Chena: It's because someone didn't help, auntie.
Warui's Mom: Chuckles.
Warui's Mom: Warui, you've got to help Chena sometimes.
Chena: Sometimes?
Warui: Scoffs.
Warui: [Low]. I know.
Warui's Mom: She takes a step back.
Warui's Mom: Why don't we eat the apples in the field?
Chena: Sure auntie.
Warui: I guess that's nice.
Warui's Mom: Okay, let me get us something to sit on.
Warui's Mom: You two wait here.
Chena: How about uncle and my parents?
Warui's Mom: She turns her head while continuing into the town.
Warui's Mom: We'll save some apples for them later.
Chena: Laughs and smiles.
Chena: Okay.
Chena: She looks at Warui.
Chena: Your mom's sometimes means all the time.
Warui: Yeah, when it goes through your ears.
Chena: No-
River: He comes running from the entrance of the town.
River: Guys!
River: Guys!
Chena and Warui: Look toward the town entrance.
Warui: What?
Chena: Hm?
River: He stops in front of them, puts his hands on his knees, and pants.
River: I heard from your mom.
River: He pants.
River: That you're eating apples in the field.
Warui: We are.
River: Can I join?
River: I didn't have breakfast today.
Chena: Of course.
Warui: Yeah.
River: He stands straight.
River: Yes!
River: Grandma was too lazy to cook.
Chena: She giggles.
Warui: I'm actually a little thir-
Town: A sudden, violent gust of wind slams into the town in front of them.
Town: Roofs rip away from the buildings. Debris launches through the air.
Town: Sharp, precise slashes of wind follow fractions of a second later, cutting through the town and nearly leveling it.
Wind: The roar is deafening.
Warui: The force throws him backward onto the path. He lands on his butt, then rolls onto his stomach.
Chena: She is blown backward onto her upper back and rolls onto her right side.
River: He is blown backward onto his upper back and rolls onto his left side.
Chena: The basket falls from her grip. Apples spill across the path as the basket rolls away.
Path: Chena lies beside Warui. River lies behind them.
Warui and River: Their hair is thrown around by the wind.
Chena: Her hair lashes around in the wind.
Warui: He watches another wave strike the town.
Warui: From his perspective, he tries to crawl forward and reaches out with his right hand.
Warui: He blinks.
Warui: Another blink.
Warui: A slower blink.
Warui's POV: Goes black.
Warui: His eyes open.
Building: Warui lies on a blanket on the floor.
Warui: He stares at the ceiling, then immediately sits up and starts panting.
Warui: He looks to his right.
Building: Children and adults lie across the floor or sit talking to one another. Some hold their wounds while others are being tended to.
Warui: His eyes drift downward.
Warui: He sees Chena beside him, lying on her back asleep.
Warui: He turns to his left.
Building: The same scene stretches across that side of the room: injured children and adults lying down, sitting up, talking, and being tended to.
Warui: He looks down.
River: He lies on his back asleep beside Warui.
Warui: He looks ahead.
Warui: His eyes lower and he tilts his head downward.
Warui: [Under his breath]. Mom?
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