Chapter 25:

Apology

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling


I would like to say thank you to everyone who has read this far. It makes me happy that there are people who enjoy my writing. This story, while wholesome and quite a bit cuter and funnier than the original, I feel that the original is better.

Things that got cut:

About 10 pages of content:

A lot of really heartfelt scenes. Some were r-18, but some got cut because I couldn't find a way to make the preceding scene wholesome.

A Chocola Omorashi scene.

Most of "Omelettes and Milk"

A completely different ending half of "A Cuddly Rapey Reunion.

The heartfelt maid-mistress roleplay between Lexa and Kanna that the entire next chapter (#25: Amnesia) was built on. So, by extension, you lost:

1. The last half of "Separation"

2. An entire chapter.

However, this did encourage me to make some changes, which may make it back to the original (Flow stuff, wording. I'll put some more cuddling in...maybe...)

If anyone has ideas for a side story, let me know in the comments(Not the Discord...I won't see it.) Give me a prompt, some things you want to see, and the characters. Anyone who appears in the story or in the character list is an option. I'm about to write a story with one chapter: The full, original character list.

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